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RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 2 - HellsBells - 11-02-2010 04:19 PM
This really reads like a real Spooks episode and that is why I like your writing so much. It is good that Harry and Ruth are a couple and just carrying on as normal, okay apart from the little thigh squeeze which was a lovely touch.
RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 2 - Silktie - 11-02-2010 05:05 PM
Great chapter - many little things I loved:
Tariq giggling in the meeting
Ruth poking fun at the report Harry wrote
Harry's hand on Ruth's knee, of course
You like your cliffhanger endings, don't you? Good one, I'm very curious as to what's going on and what exactly Ruth found.
RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 2 - JHyde - 11-02-2010 05:10 PM
'Course I do. I want you to come and read the next chapter
I must admit I had second thoughts about the Tariq joke. It doesn't exactly trip off the tongue for me or for him. But - - I love puns. And ultimately it's not out of character as we don't know much about him apart from his t-shirts, his bike riding and his humour.