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RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - Kirayuki - 01-01-2010 06:19 PM
Thankyou! Loving the quick update.
"Ruth playing good cop, I suppose?" - I just found that amusing. I also liked Harry and Lucas meaning different people after the brifing. Subtlety is loved here.
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - Silktie - 01-01-2010 06:32 PM
I have a sinking feeling you're going to put Ruth in harm's way. Nooooo! Poor Harry, he should have learnt by now not to make any promises to Ruth. I didn't find this chapter too expositionary, it moved the plot along, and you still managed to slip in some nice character moments. Felt really sorry for Ruth missing the feeling of a loving hug. I really hope you let Harry hug her at some stage!
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 01-01-2010 06:36 PM
Like all good classicists, I believe in portentous statements
Which isn't surprising given the title of the story itself. (And now you all start wondering.)Silktie, I promise I have a wonderful plan for your suggestion. I am hugging myself in glee just thinking about it.
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - lwhite53 - 01-01-2010 07:33 PM
Can we get chap 5 just as quickly, pretty please?
Loved this -- great dialogue (can see the edits in my mind), Ruth in the interrogation room, Lucas and Harry meaning different people, Ruth as the not registry clerk. And Harry making promises -- stop it Harry, that guarantees disaster!
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - Beatriz - 01-01-2010 08:38 PM
Not boring at all!! This comes from a girl in need for sleep
It's a great story, very well written
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - Tea Lady - 02-01-2010 12:22 AM
Not boring at all. Far from it. I am scared for Ruth now as well. She does get left out of important decisions though. That must be hard to take. I guess she is probably used to it by now.
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - TygerBright - 02-01-2010 05:53 PM
Oh you are the bestestestest
I come home after two spookless days (yeah, I know
) and find two new chapters... will print & snuggle up on couch with some nice Glühwein to read
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 02-01-2010 06:25 PM
Wow! I'm worth the toner to be printed and then snuggled up with? That could be one of the nicest things anyone has ever said!
The next chapter is currently being written and will have lots of answers. It is HUGE!!!! So stay tuned.
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - lwhite53 - 02-01-2010 06:39 PM
Tuned in and waiting . . . . . .
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - YourFutureMuse - 02-01-2010 09:49 PM
It might be too late now but if not the word is Nemo
And my essay is complete