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RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 6 - HellsBells - 01-04-2010 05:55 PM Sorry for the late review, but I read the whole story again from the beginning. This is really great and enjoyed this chapter immensely. Poor Lucas being reminded of Darshavin so unexpectedly. Wonderful writing ! RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 6 - JHyde - 01-04-2010 07:18 PM Thanks guys - I really needed to hear all this. I should have the final chapter up sometime over the long weekend. It's a really, meaty personal chapter...so hopefully you'll come back for more. RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 6 - Nia M - 04-04-2010 01:34 PM Brilliant action chapter here - particularly Ros going solo and winning, and Lucas' 'manic' attack RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 6 - AnnMarie - 19-09-2010 02:17 AM Loved this line...""I'll resist the urge to make jokes about back entrances and surprises," said Lucas softly"...nicely done. Ros, single handed. Of course. |