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Looking for Bertie Part IV
29-02-2012, 05:37 AM
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RE: Looking for Bertie Part IV
I can only echo what everyone else has said, a wonderful chapter! Loved the little touches such as Ruth sleeping on his shoulder and helping with his bow-tie, the descriptions of the 2 different sides of Kenya were great and gave a real insight in not that many words. I'm liking Tim so far (apart from his tendancy to interrupt) and his 'little lady' comment was fantastic. The mix of plot and HR is perfect!

All in all a great chapter and a fantastic ending..... Alwyas like a cliffhanger and I'll be waiting impatiently as always for the next chapter!
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Looking for Bertie Part IV - Silktie - 28-02-2012, 12:02 PM
RE: Looking for Bertie Part IV - A Cousin - 28-02-2012, 03:30 PM
RE: Looking for Bertie Part IV - Tea Lady - 28-02-2012, 06:28 PM
RE: Looking for Bertie Part IV - pookster - 28-02-2012, 06:52 PM
RE: Looking for Bertie Part IV - nimax1 - 29-02-2012, 01:33 AM
RE: Looking for Bertie Part IV - Sparky - 29-02-2012 05:37 AM

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