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Ruth's Diary - No.11 (3.1)
08-04-2010, 08:07 PM
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RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11
Great entry JHyde, you convey Ruth's concerns for both Harry and Tom brilliantly. One typo that I noticed, in paragraph 4 you refer to Christine Dale as Christine Quinn.
harry
We move on from this
It's the realisation that I make a negligible difference
Sometimes you have to give a man a chance



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Ruth's Diary - No.11 (3.1) - by JHyde - 08-04-2010, 06:31 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - by Tea Lady - 08-04-2010, 07:14 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - by Aria - 08-04-2010, 08:07 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - by JHyde - 08-04-2010, 08:10 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - by lwhite53 - 08-04-2010, 10:59 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - by Silktie - 09-04-2010, 05:51 AM

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