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Ruth's Diary - No.12 (3.2)
15-04-2010, 09:54 AM
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RE: Ruth's Diary - No.12
Great entry Beatriz. Loved all the Ruth background you put in - her holiday in Cornwall and University Challenge. It all helps add greater depth to her character. You've captured Ruth's anguish at Tom's leaving beautifully and her realisation of the toll the service takes from its agents. Loved the boxes line at the end.
harry
We move on from this
It's the realisation that I make a negligible difference
Sometimes you have to give a man a chance



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Ruth's Diary - No.12 (3.2) - by Beatriz - 15-04-2010, 09:02 AM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.12 - by Aria - 15-04-2010, 09:54 AM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.12 - by Tea Lady - 15-04-2010, 10:57 AM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.12 - by Aria - 15-04-2010, 11:35 AM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.12 - by lwhite53 - 15-04-2010, 04:19 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.12 - by Silktie - 15-04-2010, 05:05 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.12 - by Beatriz - 15-04-2010, 06:54 PM

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