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Ruth's Diary - No. 14 (3.4)
25-04-2010, 03:07 PM
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RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 14
Really lovely entry, JHyde. I greatly enjoyed this. Ruth's empathy and compassion for Harry, Catherine and later Danny comes across well.
I loved Ruth's line, "Lucky Catherine still has a father to talk with, whatever his faults." You can clearly tell she still misses her father, and watching Harry deal with his daughter may have brought up painful memories.
Loved the operation meter part - Ruth taking its failure personally rang true of the character. Also liked the references to The Personnel File.
harry
We move on from this
It's the realisation that I make a negligible difference
Sometimes you have to give a man a chance



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Ruth's Diary - No. 14 (3.4) - by JHyde - 25-04-2010, 01:43 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 14 - by lwhite53 - 25-04-2010, 03:00 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 14 - by YourFutureMuse - 25-04-2010, 03:05 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 14 - by Aria - 25-04-2010, 03:07 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 14 - by JHyde - 25-04-2010, 03:15 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 14 - by lwhite53 - 25-04-2010, 04:48 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 14 - by Silktie - 26-04-2010, 08:31 AM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 14 - by Tea Lady - 26-04-2010, 11:41 AM

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