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'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 4
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19-02-2010, 11:51 AM
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RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 4
Aww I really love how you do get a sense of the whole team working together, better than the actual scriptwriters I feel
I like how you had Ruth and Harry talking about Lucas - got a better sense of their relationship with him. And I also loved Ros in this, you write the action parts reallly well
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I like how you had Ruth and Harry talking about Lucas - got a better sense of their relationship with him. And I also loved Ros in this, you write the action parts reallly well


