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Who Told the Albanians? (2)
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20-04-2010, 08:57 PM
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RE: Who Told the Albanians? (2)
Sorry, LL. I read this days ago and swore I had left feedback. Liked how you set the scene and furthered the characterisations. Loved Lucas struggling with technology and liked the tense cliffhanger as well.
 We move on from this It's the realisation that I make a negligible difference Sometimes you have to give a man a chance |
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Who Told the Albanians? (2) - Lukyan Lyubof - 10-04-2010, 08:08 PM
RE: Who Told the Albanians? (2) - Aria - 20-04-2010 08:57 PM
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