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The Man On The Wall Part II
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04-01-2011, 02:33 PM
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RE: The Man On The Wall Part II
You are very good at capturing speech patterns. You have Towers' speech pattern down perfectly. I can hear SRB in my head when I read what you wrote for him.
Just an observation and a couple of things to throw at the wall re: Towers' last line to Ruth. She has done the same for Harry already. She gave up everything 5 years ago to save him from going to prison. What is different about this situation? Does saving Harry mean putting him back in a job he doesn't seem to want anymore? Or does saving him mean leaving him be in his new life? How unselfish will she be? Now cracks a noble heart. Good-night, sweet [Spooks]; And flights of angels sing thee to thy rest. ~Wm. Shakespeare, Hamlet |
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