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False Omen Ch. 4
01-01-2010, 07:33 PM
Post: #14
RE: False Omen Ch. 4
Can we get chap 5 just as quickly, pretty please?

Loved this -- great dialogue (can see the edits in my mind), Ruth in the interrogation room, Lucas and Harry meaning different people, Ruth as the not registry clerk. And Harry making promises -- stop it Harry, that guarantees disaster!

harry
"What is the truth?"
"Betrayal is a cancer. Let it eat your soul, not mine."
"Please tell me this isn't going where I think it's going."
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False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 01-01-2010, 05:46 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - YourFutureMuse - 01-01-2010, 05:52 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 01-01-2010, 05:53 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - YourFutureMuse - 01-01-2010, 05:58 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 01-01-2010, 06:00 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - almh - 01-01-2010, 06:02 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 01-01-2010, 06:05 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - almh - 01-01-2010, 06:07 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - YourFutureMuse - 01-01-2010, 06:15 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 01-01-2010, 06:16 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - Kirayuki - 01-01-2010, 06:19 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - Silktie - 01-01-2010, 06:32 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 01-01-2010, 06:36 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - lwhite53 - 01-01-2010 07:33 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - Beatriz - 01-01-2010, 08:38 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - Tea Lady - 02-01-2010, 12:22 AM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - TygerBright - 02-01-2010, 05:53 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - JHyde - 02-01-2010, 06:25 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - lwhite53 - 02-01-2010, 06:39 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 4 - YourFutureMuse - 02-01-2010, 09:49 PM

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