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False Omen Ch. 8
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09-01-2010, 04:36 AM
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RE: False Omen Ch. 8
I've just re-read the whole story at one go (I printed it out) and I'm stunned anew by how good it is. The plot is well conceived, the various threads masterfully controlled, the action convincing, the dialogue true. But more than that, the nuanced writing really is superb. All the little moments -- between Harry and Ruth, Lucas and Ros, Ros and Wendy, Ruth and Bushra, Lucas and Harry -- are just amazing. Your understanding of these characters is somewhat scary. Truly, congratulations -- this is great stuff!
 "What is the truth?" "Betrayal is a cancer. Let it eat your soul, not mine." "Please tell me this isn't going where I think it's going." |
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False Omen Ch. 8 - JHyde - 07-01-2010, 03:29 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - TygerBright - 07-01-2010, 03:57 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - Kirayuki - 07-01-2010, 04:04 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - Beatriz - 07-01-2010, 04:17 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - YourFutureMuse - 07-01-2010, 04:28 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - Tea Lady - 07-01-2010, 04:29 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - almh - 07-01-2010, 05:41 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - Silktie - 07-01-2010, 05:44 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - lwhite53 - 07-01-2010, 05:50 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - JHyde - 07-01-2010, 09:57 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - Fidget - 08-01-2010, 12:49 AM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - lwhite53 - 09-01-2010 04:36 AM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - JHyde - 09-01-2010, 05:21 AM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - lwhite53 - 09-01-2010, 03:01 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - kirmostar - 09-01-2010, 10:11 AM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - JHyde - 09-01-2010, 10:38 AM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - HellsBells - 09-01-2010, 07:04 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - JHyde - 10-01-2010, 12:43 AM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - deathbymascara - 25-01-2010, 05:22 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - A Cousin - 08-07-2010, 02:55 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - JHyde - 08-07-2010, 03:31 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - AnnMarie - 19-09-2010, 04:49 PM
RE: False Omen Ch. 8 - JHyde - 20-09-2010, 07:37 AM
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