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False Omen Ch. 3
01-01-2010, 05:51 PM
Post: #11
RE: False Omen Ch. 3
Yay this is so good!! Yahoo Well worth breaking my spooks abstinence for! Tongue When I read it I can actually imagine it playing out in my head as an actual episode! It is so well written and I am so drawn in to the storyline I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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01-01-2010, 08:09 PM
Post: #12
RE: False Omen Ch. 3
Love knowing about Ruth childhood Wink It was a great read, rushing to chapter 4 Smile
Good to have another team member

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01-01-2010, 08:13 PM
Post: #13
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I'm not sure Wendy is a team member, more someone roped in from another department to help out on surveillance.

But I'll see if I can tuck her in another chapter Smile

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02-01-2010, 03:21 AM
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If so, do the guys a favor and have her wear the stilettos!

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02-01-2010, 08:18 AM
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when can we expect the next chapter I can't wait for my personalised scene of Lucas!! Big Grin

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02-01-2010, 09:02 AM
Post: #16
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Lucas scene coming up soon, I promise.

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03-01-2010, 08:00 AM
Post: #17
RE: False Omen Ch. 3
Tariq chose that moment to blunder onto the Grid, pulling his helmet from his head and looking as though he'd been pulled through a hedge backwards. He hadn't quite mastered the art of semi-corporate dressing yet.


This was my favourite bit, and the whole thing is so well written I can visualise it all
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