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Epoque Ch.1
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21-01-2010, 08:35 PM
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RE: Epoque Ch.1
"to go and play an extra string to Harry's bow for the benefit of the brass" -- just re-read the story and found this -- what a great line! Love how you play with the word "brass." Really nice use of language.
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22-01-2010, 04:43 PM
Post: #12
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RE: Epoque Ch.1
I really like this, you have captured them so well. I can just imagine this happening, it is written perfectly.
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22-01-2010, 11:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 22-01-2010 11:17 PM by Kirayuki.)
Post: #13
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RE: Epoque Ch.1
Yay!
 Finally got around to reading it and i'm liking how it's set up. I'm looking forward to the next installment.  I agree with lwhite53 that the Brass line is fantastic wording. Your writing is fantastic! +Rep for you! 
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