On With the Snow (Chapter 2)

[TygerBright]

(10-02-2010 09:04 PM)Nia M Wrote:  TygerBright: Poker is not my main concern in this fic Sledging, snow, snowmen and snowball fights however...
Am very intruiged by this Christmas card though!

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Hadn't thought about snow angels!

oh I don't insist on any gambling ... snowball fights tho.. we'd need two teams and leaders... Ros and Harry.. or the lads vs the lasses (I think Ros, Ruth & Jo could beat harry, Adam & Zaf any day)? Life's tough enough on the Grid, bit of a letting-hair-down chance might be nice

as for THAT card - it's here.. 'twas a little seasonal sillyness

[Tea Lady]

(10-02-2010 09:04 PM)Nia M Wrote:  Tea Lady: I too loved Juliet, but for the sake of this fic I needed someone to ask where Harry was, and that was the first situation that popped into mind.

Oh please dont think I was criticising, I was more speaking out loud about how she is portrayed in fanfic in general. She does fit into you story just right though.

And TB, please do not do anything to Harry that involves bunny rabbits!!

[TygerBright]

I promise I'll get him wetted (oops, where did that come from.. wrong thread) VETTED by you before I put anything up for Easter

[Nia M]

(10-02-2010 09:11 PM)TygerBright Wrote:  oh I don't insist on any gambling ... snowball fights tho.. we'd need two teams and leaders... Ros and Harry.. or the lads vs the lasses (I think Ros, Ruth & Jo could beat harry, Adam & Zaf any day)? Life's tough enough on the Grid, bit of a letting-hair-down chance might be nice

as for THAT card - it's here.. 'twas a little seasonal sillyness

Not exactly the teams I had in mind, but I'm sticking with my original option for reasons which will eventually become clear

[TygerBright]

had the time to read both chapters in one go now, taking my sweet time.. and I can't believe I'm thinking this, let alone saying it out loud but
I'm soooooo looking forward to the next chapter of a H/R story

very well written, softly and leaving a lot to the imagination of your readers..
I very much enjoyed Jo's thoughts on the matter, made me giggle.. as did the "domestic dispute" with Zaf
and Harry and Ruth finally get to finish THAT conversation...
...and the term "kids" is very fitting for the team... and the idea of terrorists skiing or skating across the Thames with their little sleighs packed with explosives... brilliant
you really write them very well, and I'm not even missing Lucas

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!

still, I won't be going over to the "fluffy" side..

[Nia M]

Well we've converted you enough thus-so-far, so maybe with a bit of luck and a couple more chapters you'll cross over

I take it that when you say 'THAT conversation', you mean the 'Grand Tour' one in the restaurant?

The Zaf/Jo domestic dispute was the more fun I've had so far writing this (including Chapters 3 and 4), but I have a feeling that what happens after that will overtake it

[TygerBright]

for various reasons, I will never cross over
and yes, that was THE conversation I was referring to.. I've only just made my way half through season 3 but I had a sneak peek at that episode.. research for Kirayuki's wallpaper .. liked it very much but I think it's time some things are said .. you make them.

[Nia M]

See if you were a devoted Harry/Ruth fan, then I would have said that you should have put research in inverted commas As it is, I can just about believe you...

To anyone that hasn't seen it, Chapter 3 is now up - link at the bottom of first post on this thread

[SPOOK91]

This is a great story, love the banter between Zaf, Adam and Jo; I can totally imagine her ordering him around

Series 8 Spoiler: show

- I miss Jo!

Love the little Harry and Ruth bits, and the the chat about Juliet, after all she has had what Ruth hasn't!

[Nia M]

...what Ruth hasn't had YET! (I'm staying optimistic! )

Thanks for your comments