Ruth's Diary No. 8 (2.8)

[Silktie]

Very nicely done. I like how you guys are subtly building in Ruth's increasing notice of all things Harry. And how she refuses to acknowledge to herself at this point that she may be developing a crush on her boss. The grammar thing makes sense to me - Ruth was very stressed about her future at this point and when one is stressed you tend to fall back on the things you can control. In Ruth's case that's her intellect and noticing every small little detail about everything.