Ruth's Diary - No.11 (3.1)

[Silktie]

Great chapter. I think you capture well how Harry is slowly growing in importance in Ruth's conscience, but that she at this stage believes it's just professional respect that she has for him. Although she did notice he was only half-dressed, great touch. Also liked her first impressions of Adam, as she did seem the one to accept him the quickest after Tom left.

You also captured the essence of Ruth quite well, as at this stage of her career she has that wonderful compassion for her colleagues, but are perhaps a little less concerned with the fall-out of what they do as she becomes later on.