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Ruth's Diary - No. 15 (3.5)
14-05-2010, 03:24 PM
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RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15
Great entry -- loved that Ruth knew what she was doing was wrong but went right ahead and did it anyway. And the juxtaposition of Zoe's happiness and R's loneliness was terrific. As was the the "thrill of the chase" and "chocolate" -- great imagery.

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Ruth's Diary - No. 15 (3.5) - Beatriz - 13-05-2010, 12:38 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Aria - 13-05-2010, 01:11 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Tea Lady - 13-05-2010, 04:14 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Silktie - 13-05-2010, 04:30 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - lwhite53 - 14-05-2010 03:24 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - spooksdreamer - 15-05-2010, 01:57 AM

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