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False Omen Ch. 6
05-01-2010, 08:00 PM
Post: #11
RE: False Omen Ch. 6
No, I don't think you need a warning -- it was just, as Silktie said, harrowing. Took a couple of moments to breathe again.

Poor Bushra -- the woman didn't do anything wrong and yet she's dead. More collateral damage for Ruth to wrap her mind around.

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05-01-2010, 09:37 PM
Post: #12
RE: False Omen Ch. 6
Oh wow, that was good Big Grin

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05-01-2010, 10:03 PM
Post: #13
RE: False Omen Ch. 6
Poor Ruth. Sad
(She needs something to go right for her for once. *hint hint* Tongue)

Seriously though, your writing's fantastic!

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05-01-2010, 10:14 PM
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RE: False Omen Ch. 6
Great story so far I am really enjoying it, well done
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05-01-2010, 10:19 PM
Post: #15
RE: False Omen Ch. 6
Absolutely loved it! Topless Lucas, tense and emotional scenes, the word nemo Big Grin It had absolutely everything! You are such a talented writer! Once I started reading I was, yet again, completely captured by the story!! All the scenes and character interactions are so believable! Its as if it has come straight out of an episode... if I were Kudos I would hire you straight away Wink
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06-01-2010, 03:06 AM
Post: #16
RE: False Omen Ch. 6
wow!! this one was so good!! Poor Ruth, another dead... I didn't see that coming!!
Nail-biting chapter!! Well done!! Smile

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06-01-2010, 07:21 AM
Post: #17
RE: False Omen Ch. 6
(05-01-2010 07:57 PM)JHyde Wrote:  Maybe I should put a violence warning at the top? I didn't think it was anything more than what the show does.

No, don't think that's necessary. It's just so well written that I can fully identify with the characters' plight. It's not the violence that makes it harrowing, it's the tension you create.

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06-01-2010, 08:14 AM
Post: #18
RE: False Omen Ch. 6
OMG I woke up to see Ch 7 so have quickly read this and it's awesome - thank you for the scene with Lucas and Ros in the mens' room - hilarious! Poor Ruth and obv poor Bushra. The tension built was brilliant.
Right, now off to read Ch7.......
Love it!!!

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07-01-2010, 12:26 PM
Post: #19
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Excellent writing , I am really enjoying this story.

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